130D: Punctuation Application

Congratulations! Winning the Patrelli account from our competition is quite a coup. Ms. McDaniel, our new marketing VP, called just as soon as she saw the order. She asked me how you convinced Ms. Patrelli to buy from us.

Your outstanding multi-media presentation definitely made an impression on Ms. Patrelli. The video was entertaining and well paced. When you quickly and accurately answered her questions, she was favorably impressed and felt confident that you knew your product. Also, when you used our spreadsheet program to determine her potential profits, I saw her expression change from negative to positive.

You certainly did your homework for this presentation. Thanks for your hard work in landing this account.