The Speaker's Gone Mad!

He hates the written speech script! AND the teacher said to re-do it, that this is a manuscript, not an outline!
As a group, use netmeeting to edit it! It should follow the organization pattern assigned to you.

1) Read the manuscript:

2) Save this page in Word as a Word document. Do you need help? Copy and paste can also work.

3) Edit the outline together in Word using Netmeeting.

3) Other than the lack of an outline, what's wrong with the speech? Well, just the time limit!
WHEW! This speech is running 12 minutes long. You need to cut it to a 7 minute speech (obviously the "time" you cut it to is going to be a guess on your part)

 

Sample Outline, Thanks to Vanessa Wendelken
- BUT I DID DESTROY HER OUTLINE! SORRY VANESSA!

Vanessa Wendelken

Speech 1114:18

M.W.F 2-2:50 pm

Good Citizens Speech:  Community Food Response

Topic: Community Food Response

Specific Purpose:  Encourage others to volunteer to work at Community Food Response.

According to an article in Restaurant  Hospitality, "More than 12% of the U.S. population--that's about 34.5 million people--live  below the poverty level. Even sadder: According to the US Census Bureau,  more than 40% of all poor Americans are children. This means that nearly 20%  of American children under the age of 18--that's 13 million kids--live in poverty." That's quite a large number, but many of you may not know someone that  fights with hunger every day.  Many of you are fortunate enough to be able to not worry about how you will afford your next meal. I've been working at Community Food Response, a local organization that  gives out food that has been donated from various restaurants in the area.  I talked with Lois McDougal, one of the main people of the organization and I  also found many periodical references pertaining to the topic. Today I will tell you how you what the needs of Community Food Response are and how you can benefit from helping fill those needs. An article in the May 1999,  Supermarket  Business talked of a "document that is the 1998 annual report of Second  Harvest, the Chicago-based umbrella for 188 US food banks, bears on its  cover an empty plate and the simple, telling statement: “No dream can live  without dinner.”"

A community can be greatly torn up by hunger.  It affects anyone and everyone in some way or another.  Hunger leaves a burden on everyone, be that  you are the one in need of food or the person who is paying higher taxes for  their aid.  Living in a community, which is world renown for its great  medical facility, many would not believe that hunger is a strong issue facing  our area.  However, this is a bigger issue than you probably ever guessed.  In interviewing Lois McDougall, a leader of Community Food Response, I learned that they serve an average of 85 - 100 families each night.  That is quite a large number for the small community of Rochester, Minnesota.  Obviously, for all these people to be fed, they would need a lot of volunteers!  Unfortunately, as Lois explained, "most of the drivers who pick up food at local restaurants are retired and go away for the winter, leaving that position the most needed in the coming winter months." There are a variety of people who benefit from this food.  Referring  again to my interview with Lois, I learned that about one third of the people served are single.  They also help many homeless and mental health patients. 
Working there one would notice that there are people of all ages served.  All different ethnic backgrounds, but all equally as thankful for what they are receiving. Everyone who has worked there has a story of someone special.  One day a white middle-aged woman came to get her food.  She looked well  dressed, intelligent, and totally untypical from what you might think.  After handing her the food, she said "God bless you."  Before hearing that I wasn't sure that I had actually had that much of an impact on those people, but after that day, I knew that to them I was like an angel.  That is a memory I will cherish forever. Community Food Response is a great organization which is only  possible because of all the generous people that work to keep it going.Community Food Response involves a great amount of people.  For the most part, the volunteers are supplied by various local churches.  The money for this organization is acquired through various grants from places such as U.P.S., the Rochester Area Foundation, Mayo Clinic, and The Bonner Foundation on the west coast.  There are a variety of different jobs that keep this organization running.  In fact, approximately twenty volunteers keep it running each day.  As you already know, presently the most needed position is winter drivers.  However, extra people to bag food, hand out food, and clean up are always welcome.  Not to mention, donations are never frowned upon. Every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday these twenty people work together.  The drivers go to local organizations such as HyVee and the Canadian Honker to pick up the food that would otherwise be thrown away.  Next the food is delivered at Bethel Lutheran Church, where more volunteers unload the trucks of food and bring it into the kitchen to be packaged and sorted.  Later more volunteers come to help with bagging the separate meals for the various families that come by to receive the much-needed food.  Finally, the coolers are cleaned out, the extra food stuffed into the freezer and everyone goes home. As I said earlier, anyone can help and volunteers are always appreciated. If you are interested in working with Community Food Response you can call Michelle Armbruster at 281-5061.  You could then inform her of the days you would be available to help.You may reach an answering machine, in which case you would leave the information and she would be able to get back to you. Just a small amount of help can greatly benefit not only the organization but also you. Community Food Response is a great thing for our community.  It provides a solution to hunger and helps our community to be the healthy unit it is.  By being a volunteer or supporter of this organization you are not only helping out the organization, you are also benefiting from it yourself.  You can make a powerful impact in this community by simply donating a few hours of your time. If this organization was not present in our community we may be more aware of the problem of hunger in our community.  Obviously we are not witness to this because it has been curved by the formation of this wonderful organization.  An organization that could still have problems if they don't find the number of winter drivers needed to keep the organization running.  No one that works at Community Food Response wants to turn someone away without food.
A community is a living unit of life.  If one person is not all right, we all suffer in some way or another.  However, if we all band together to help people that are less fortunate than ourselves, imagine what we can create. I hope that I've given you reason to donate your time to an organization I feel very important to our community. When I first started at Community Food Response I hardly felt that my help could make an impact on someone's life; however, now I realize that it has.  I could tell you numerous stories that brought good feelings into my heart, but I think that the only way you could truly feel them would be to have some of your own. By helping Community Food Response you are donating your time to a great organization with a great cause and a great purpose.  Eventually, all the goodness will come back to you in some form, that I guarantee you.